A two year difference.

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hey every one it’s the main man micheal here i am just going to put up a poem i wrote about how i felt two years ago i have chosen to name it “A two year difference”.

No body cares about me…

i am living every day of my life through depression

showing my feelings to the world at threatning expressions

because my well being is ignored and put into detention

now i sleep.. 6months, 12 months now two years later…

eye lids stutter as i wake up and move a motion

stare in the mirror of sorrow and ask if there is a feeling of reflection

refusing to show any verbs of direction

as i weep i am dared to answer a question…

who wants to know, why does it care

i wipe a mirror to make it all clear

in a hollowed voice of fear,

i am asked again stuck in a tear

who wants to know, why does it care

i hear a next voice in the next room

JAILER, JAILER!! why i’m i here

response: who wants to know, why does it care??

SOUTHBANK YOUNG BLOGGERS

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7 Responses to “A two year difference.”

  1. Samara Straker Says:

    Yo yo Micheal, I loved the poem man, keep up the good work!

  2. Yemisi Blake Says:

    Michael,
    you are the main man! I’m liking the poem, and the hoodie! It looks strangely familiar.
    See you on Weds,
    Yem

  3. michaelgriffiths71 Says:

    omg that was baddddddddddddddddddddddd. nah serious dat was deeep. michael even i have to say that was inspirational

  4. Aaron Says:

    Hey bro – thanks for sharing it with us, raw, honest & very brave, look forward to reading some more:)

  5. Rachel Says:

    Michael, this is deep! I’m blown away, keep writing.
    (and we care :))

  6. Aaron Says:

    Hey bro – thanks for sharing it with us, its raw, honest and very brave, nice one mate, look forward to reading some more in the future:)

  7. Rachel Says:

    Michael – this is deep! keep on writing!
    (p.s. we care:))

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